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Blargh. For some reason dA logged me out when I clicked submit deviation and now I have to type this all out again. DX
But anyway. Yarh. I'm still alive. I haven't been updating and I felt like I should. So here I am. As many of ya know, I've been on a major artist's block lately so I haven't been able to draw anything and finish it. I really had to force myself to finish this drawing, because I really liked the direction in which it was heading. o-o;; Luckily all I had to finish was the hair. But yarh... I really wanted to redraw/remake? this picture because I felt like the old drawing I had didn't do enough justice. D= It's so off now that I compare it, god only knows how it got accepted into the Laguna Museum of Art. o-o;; But. Yarh. I love the expression she has in this picture, she has an absolutely gorgeous smile, but I wasn't really interested in drawing that, I wanted to capture her beauty in a moment that isn't common. Not sure why. XP But. I felt like it was unique in it's own way so I had to draw it. o-o;;; Well. Back then anyway. XP I hope you all like. Comments and critique would be helpful. ^^ -m[Keynan]w Old - [link] WIP 1 - [link] WIP 2 - [link] WIP 3 - [link] RE: Before A Smile -KTH Blank- [link] Graphite - 4H 2H HB B 2B 3B 6B 8B Time - 8+ hours? o-o Bristol Smooth 14" x 17" [Doesn't fill up the whole thing though.] Edit: I decided to take |
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Wow this is such an improvememt! I love this drawing! no mistakes or anything that I might have been able to pic-out in the last one but I do want to say this. There is this thing that I had a problem with for the longest time! Valuse and Contrast. You should try making your shading darker. Maybe you just like drawing lightly. But I liked what happened to my art when I made it darker. See the eyes and the hair in your drawing? they are a nuber ten on the value scale. The rest like the cheeks the nose and the lips--even where the head meats the hair--all falls under four on the value scale. Just try it and see if you like it.
Great work on this one! I hope that I get lots more work from you! FAV!
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Shoot, man, that looked like a photograph at first. KUDOS- I LOVE IT!
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